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Written by long-standing TAAU member, Raptor_7_7_7, this is an adaptation of the Transformers: The Movie opening scene which sees Unicron attack and destroy the peaceful planet of Lithone. If you have any thoughts, comments, praise or criticism, then please feel free to send Raptor_7_7_7 an email, as he'd love to receive your feedback, in whatever form it comes!

"UNICRON'S ATTACK," by Raptor_7_7_7

It was most positively one of the most glorious systems that could ever have existed. Within the centre of the solar system, a beautiful display of two suns, that were dark blue and a light, pinkish red lay together in glorious format. The binary suns shot off licks of fire of various shades of light that could be seen throughout the cosmos in this area. A few exploded, while others continued upon their great path.

However, all was not peaceful, nor natural within this part of the universe. A monstrous, spherical shaped, metallic object flew past. It seemed to possess quite a menacing look, one that would fill one in dread just to notice the metallic planet. A long yellow-orange ring, connected to it via four long shafts at the quarter parts of the planet encircled it around its left and right sides, across the top and bottom. The outer shell of the planet was primarily a grey-blue, with a few shades of white in different places. At the front of the planet was a large, orange orifice, which opened up to an abyss of twisted, evil mechanics and workings. A ring of jagged spikes encircled it, like a round set of teeth, while two long, orange, demonic-looking pincers gave the metallic planet an even more menacing, evil, dreading look.

However, despite all of these components and shapes, the most horrifying thing about the monster was the size. It was by far too gigantesque to be classed as a normal planet – even a gas giant was quite minuscule when compared to its size. Perhaps the easiest way to describe the sheer size of the yellow-orange metal planet would be to make a comparison with a star. Perhaps, out of all the stars that exist within the great universe, this great planet could be leisurely compared to that of a white dwarf. Yet, even that type of star was by far, quite large compared with the planet. It would seem that the only scale that would exist for this demonic-looking metal planet was between that of a large gas giant and a small white dwarf star.

The planet continued its flight through space, until within its view, it saw a small planet, that had its own metallic crust, yet much more rocky than that of the behemoth that came towards it. It would seem like the smaller planet was made of raw metal, still embodied within its ore elements. The cities that were built upon this planet were quite large – though to a human eye, it would be hard to distinguish a city from the natural metallic surface.

It was also clear that the natives of this planet were not at all primitive. Ships for different purposes flew past different sections of the planet, each on their own different tasks. However, what was strange about this planet, was the inhabitants were not of organic life – yet this factor did indeed seem to fit in perfectly with the type of planet. They were robots.

Different shapes and sizes they were in. Most of them commonly had triangular shaped heads, and dull, dark-coloured bodies. The very population seemed to be made up of scientists, doctors and others that had occupations that were similar to such things. Two of the robotic beings walked through a large corridor, both heading in the same direction, and both carrying different things, such as devices, chemicals and containers.

They eventually found their way to a science lab, and one member of the duo gave to another robot with a similar type body a tray with two tall handles at the side and three containers with blue-coloured pink-coloured chemicals in them. Suddenly, the entire room began to shake intensively. The clear containers clashed against each other and then gave way and fell on the ground, shattering and spilling the contents all over the ground. One of the robots rushed over to a monitor and large keypad.

‘Arblus! Look!’ called out the robot – whose face had changed to one of horror – who was at the monitor. The other one walked over, and his face too changed to horror.

‘This can’t be, Kranix!’ Arblus cried.

‘Its...’ Kranix stuttered. ‘Its Unicron!’ he finished off, pointing at the horned, monster planet.

‘We have to get out of here! Fast!’

And so the duo ran far from the science station. The entire city, the entire planet, was in chaos. Everyone was running around, trying to escape from the Chaos Bringer. Some were attempting to reach ships, but it was all in a vain effort, for the monster planet’s gravitational pull had already started to bring in parts of the city, even the natural terrain of the planet, towards it.

The monster planet dauntingly overhung the planet like a spider about to devour its captured prey. The metallic monster enabled some form of white tractor beam at the planet, literally pulling the planet out of orbit. Unicron, who was clearly the monster planet, then dug its pincer-like horns into the edges of the planet, pulling it towards his mouth, which had been opened even more, by the teeth ring being opened. The planet started to be pulled even further into the mouth of Unicron, and was soon two-thirds in his mouth.

‘We have to get to the ships! The ships! Its our only chance!’ cried out Arblus to Kranix.

The two found their way to a landing platform that had three ships landed, ready to launch. The ships were a dark grey, with three engines on the rear and were tubular in shape. There was a ring around the centre of them, and leading off the ring was three thin wings. Arblus and Kranix both boarded separate ships so there was a chance that at least one of them would survive the destruction of their home world of Lithone...

The onslaught of Unicron continued. The landing platform began to be pulled up swiftly by both the tractor beam and the gravity emitted by Unicron. Kranix and Arblus both lifted off the surface of their soon-to-be-murdered world, and rocketed away from the destruction of the planet.

However, a call crackled over the radio from Arblus’s ship to Kranix’s: ‘Kranix! He’s got me! Kranix!’

Kranix looked behind him, a look of horror and fear haunting his face, as he saw his dear friend being pulled away by that, that, monster... Kranix straightened and hardened his face, then looked straight ahead. Perhaps there was a chance that he would survive the wrath of Unicron?

Not seeming to notice Kranix’s escape, Unicron continued to devour the planet. The planet was almost finished being devoured by him. The raw materials of the planet flowed through the inner-structure of Unicron’s body, as it was crushed, liquefied and put into the energy cells of his body. Among the wreckage within Unicron was a ship... A tubular ship, whose pilot was crying out in pain, as the searing heat of the energies within Unicron melted the ship into energy.

Unicron eventually devoured the last remains of the planet, and a green flow of energy could be seen going through the ring around his main body. There were no visible signs of the murdered planet ever existing. There were no asteroids, no small rocks, no bodies, no machinery or anything – just the empty, black abysses of space.

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