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Written by long-standing TAAU member Raptor_7_7_7 , this is a preview of a story he's working on called 'Transformers: Firestorm', the tale of a titantic clash between the two great Transformers leaders, Optimus Prime and Galvatron. If you have any thoughts, comments, praise or criticism, then please feel free to send Raptor_7_7_7 an email, as he'd love to receive your feedback, in whatever form it comes!

"TRANSFORMERS: FIRESTORM," by Raptor_7_7_7

Down at the Decepticon base, Optimus Prime approached the view of the Decepticons. Cyclonus and the Sweeps immediately turned and faced him. Cyclonus and Scourge’s Target Master partners swiftly transformed and jumped into their hands. Galvatron then turned his attention away from the monitor and faced his arch-nemesis.

‘So Prime, I see you’ve come once more to make an attempt to thwart my plans,’ Galvatron sarcastically sneered at Prime. ‘However, you do not realise that you will not succeed.’

‘To the contrary, I will succeed,’ Prime sternly replied.

‘You’re greatly out-numbered, and I personally have more power in me then you can possibly imagine. I also am much more stable then I previously was. More like, Megatron – how I was when Unicron originally reformatted me.

‘Those minor details will not deter me Galvatron. You will fall, and so will your plan to destroy Earth’s sun.’

‘Bah! It matters not your opinion!’ Galvatron turned his attention to his Elite-Guard. ‘Cyclonus, Scourge, Sweeps – destroy this pathetic excuse for a Transformer. I have other matters to attend to.’

With death-like gazes, Cyclonus, Scourge and the Sweeps strode over to Optimus Prime in strong, tight formation. The Autobot leader readied his laser rifle and began firing at Cyclonus. Cyclonus stomped right through the blasts, shielding himself with his arms. Optimus Prime backed off slowly at first, gradually speeding up.

‘Sweeps! Encircle him!’ Cyclonus ordered.

Scourge and the three Sweeps flew over to Prime, each landing around him in a square position. Cyclonus marched up and looked at Prime, spitting at the same time.

‘It will be a pleasure to destroy you Optimus Prime,’ he taunted. ‘Sweeps, fire in the name of Galvatron!’

The sweeps aimed and fired at Prime, chanting the words ‘for Galvatron’ constantly. Prime immediately leapt up bringing the well aimed shots slightly up with him, causing them to cruise over the Sweeps’ heads. As he began the process of landing and the Sweeps began firing up at him, Prime directed his fall near to Cyclonus, who immediately opened fire on him as he came near to landing but to no avail. Prime kicked him down then turned to face the Sweeps, firing his rifle at them rapidly. The Sweeps withstood and dodged as many shots as they could as they charged at him.

Cyclonus picked himself off the ground, and grabbed frantically at Prime’s soldiers and upper torso, pulling the great warrior down to the ground. Cyclonus aimed Nightstick at him carefully.

‘Time to die, the not-so-invincible Optimus Prime!’ he jeered, firing his Target Master partner. Prime rolled over with haste, but the glanced shot from Cyclonus hit him in the back. Prime held the pain in, pushed off the ground, launching his elbow into Cyclonus’s face. Cyclonus dropped Nightstick who swiftly transformed.

‘Blasted Autobot!’ he spat. ‘We’ll take you down yet!’

Cyclonus reeled back from the pain, his mind taking a few seconds to register the shock. Scourge and the Sweeps rushed towards Prime and Cyclonus knocking Prime down while two Sweeps grasped hold of his arms and held him up ready for punishment. Cyclonus walked over, Nightstick leaping up and transforming into gun mode into his hand.

Cyclonus aimed at Prime’s head and slowly pulled the trigger. Prime wrenched the two Sweeps who had cuffed his hands in a death grip in front of the blast, knocking them together and also being hit by the powerful laser bolt. Prime threw the two Sweeps over to Cyclonus, knocking him and themselves to the ground giving Prime enough time to retrieve his rifle. He performed an well-aimed shot at the two Sweeps heads, disabling them from the battle.

‘I see the Sweeps aren’t as cowardly as they used to be. Maybe the cowardice has worn off on you Cyclonus? Prime taunted.

‘I would not make such swift judgements if I were you Optimus Prime,’ Cyclonus retaliated. ‘Scourge! Sweep! Charge him!’

Scourge and the remaining Sweep charged Optimus Prime, giving Cyclonus time to pick himself up. The three Decepticons then opened fire on the Autobot leader relentlessly. The Autobot leader, unable to take so much concentrated fire so rapidly, forcefully fell down, slowly crawling back at the same time.

‘Your time is over Prime!’ Scourge stated.

‘My circuits still function Scourge, and nothing you do will change that!’ Prime returned.

‘To the contrary Optimus Prime, you cannot defeat all of us,’ Cyclonus said.

Optimus Prime then performed a sweeping kick, knocking all three of the warriors to the ground. Cyclonus’s and Scourge’s Target Masters leapt up, transforming to humanoid mode in the process. They leaped on Prime’s face, clawing at his optical sensors. Prime grabbed the two Target Masters, and slowly ripped them off, revealing a half-torn off face.

Prime then aimed his rifle at the remaining sweep, and fired, rendering him useless until repaired. Cyclonus and Scourge withstood a few shots from Prime before finally getting up and backing away from the tattered Autobot.

Then, Galvatron flew over head and landed, staring at Prime’s ruined face.

‘Who would have thought that the “mighty” Optimus Prime would be so scarred from this small fight. Destroying you will be less of a pleasure then I was hoping,’ Galvatron said, then immediately fired a blast at Optimus Prime.

Optimus Prime slammed to the ground, a portion of his plating falling off from Galvatron’s blast. But something was wrong… that blast should not have done that, even in Optimus Prime’s weakened state… Perhaps Galvatron had found something that augmented his power more the Prime had anticipated?

‘Cyclonus! Scourge! Get up and hold this pathetic excuse for a transformer!’ The two spawns of Unicron complied, each grasping one of Prime’s arms each. They lifted the warrior up to his knees, though he still slumped over, badly weakened from Galvatron’s cannon.

‘So pitiful!’ Galvatron snarled, pulling his fist back then launching it at Optimus Prime hard in the face. ‘Just like a dog that does not know when to back off. A typical Autobot I might say!’ he tilted Prime’s head down, then kneed him exceptionally hard in the face. ‘You disgust me Prime!’

Prime lifted his weakened head up, staring at Galvatron. ‘I cannot…’ he gasped weakly, ‘allow you to…’ the pain in his vocal module intensified, ‘to destroy this world’s sun.’

‘You may know about my plans to destroy this solar system, but it won’t help you. You see Prime, after all these many years, I have finally realised why exactly you have aligned yourself with these putrid flesh creatures.’ Prime looked somewhat surprised at this, lifting his head up slightly to hear Galvatron better. ‘They’ve supplied you with all the energy you could ever want! Yet, still with restrictions. I do not understand completely, however, as to why you just did not conquer this pathetic world! Take the resources with an iron fist! You do not need restrictions! In fact, you could have enslaved the entire human race to do your work for you!’

‘Freedom is the right for all sentient beings, Galvatron!’ Prime defied weakly.

‘Freedom! Hah! Don’t make me laugh Optimus Prime. If you were so desperate to liberate every damned species in the universe, give them freedom, then why do you hunt Decepticons? We’re sentient, we have the right to freedom!’

‘Because you wish to take the freedom of others, and as an Autobot, I will not sit by and watch you take other’s freedom to fuel your hunger for power.’

‘Ah, so we have reasons after all,’ Galvatron semi-sarcastically said, feigning a smile while slapping Primes face head with the back of his hand. ‘You’re still weak Optimus! The weak pile of junk I destroyed in 2005! The intervention of the Quintessons in 2006 only gave me a second chance to destroy you. However, I would not have enjoyed the pleasure to do so while I was an insane madman. For what you must have only inferred now is that I am fully operational, none of my circuits impaired.’ Galvatron lifted up Prime’s chin. ‘Now, Optimus Prime, you will die such a horrendous death that your pain circuits will overload – purely because they are incapable of containing the levels of pain that I will cause unto you!’

Weakly, Prime stared like death into Galvatron’s menacing optical sensors. He would not fail Earth. The Autobots were still too far away – if he fell now, Earth would be destroyed.

‘A shame somewhat,’ Galvatron continued. ‘But, your death will be quite fun nevertheless.’

Optimus Prime felt a spark of newfound life course through his entire body. He grabbed hold of Scourge’s and Cyclonus’s arms, wrenching them forward, collapsing their heads together, while pulling at them to lift himself up, then elbowing their heads with such fury that it dented their faceplates, disabling their mental functions.

‘Is this all war is to you Galvatron? A game!’ Prime roared with his newfound strength. ‘As long as every circuit in my body functions, I will not allow you to have your fun at destroying me! I will not allow Earth to be destroyed for your mad ambition of destroying an entire race of sentient beings! Today Galvatron, it will end!’

‘You’re a fool Prime! You cannot match my strength, and never will!’

Galvatron charged at Prime, unfeeling of any form of pain. Optimus Prime flew several metres as a result; his back and legs skidding against the ground several times through.

‘You will be destroyed for your foolishness! And you will not be resurrected from my blows! I will rip your body apart, and blast the pieces into such fine ash that not even Unicron would be able to provide your wretched ghost with a new body!’ Galvatron declared.

Galvatron ripped Prime up from the ground, but Prime punched the superior foe hard in the chest. Galvatron laughed, knocking his head hard against Prime’s, causing Prime’s head module to loose plating, revealing circuitry, fuses and wires inside.

Galvatron flung Prime to the ground. Fortunately for Prime, his blaster rifle was just in front of him. With all of his rapidly depleting strength, he reached for the rifle, holding it firmly, and aiming at Galvatron and firing constantly.

‘Your pathetic weapon will not harm me Optimus!’ Galvatron aimed his cannon at Prime’s rifle, and fired a swift, devastating, narrow laser that melted and disintegrated the barrel, charger and charge storage. ‘My power is absolute Optimus Prime! Defeat is absurd!’ Galvatron stomped over to Prime, wrenching his weakened body up from the ground, throwing it hard against a new patch a few metres away.

‘Without your weapon Prime, you have no chance of defeating me! You are not a warrior any more – no weapon, and by far not enough strength to harm even an Insecticon!’ Galvatron leaned down, about to rip Optimus Prime apart piece by piece.

‘Though weapons and strength I lack – but a warrior I was, am and always be!’ Prime retorted, wrenching a fallen tree trunk from the nearby ground. He pulled it back, slamming Galvatron hard in the chest and face several times over.

Galvatron laughed at the futile attempt, ripped the trunk from Prime’s grasp, who screamed out in pain like a very limb was torn from him, and then threw the trunk away. Revealed beneath Galvatron was Prime – his right arm torn off, clenched to the tree trunk Galvatron previously tore from his grasp – or more accurately, his body.

‘Do you think a stick can beat me Prime? I have more power then you think!’ and with that statement, Galvatron picked Prime up from the ground and threw him several metres away like an angry young child would to a rag doll. ‘I have much more power than you realise Prime, much more.’

Galvatron closed his fists and leant down somewhat. His size was increasing rapidly. He was becoming much, much taller, larger, stronger…Soon the great change ended, revealing Galvatron as twice his old size. Much more powerful indeed…

The titan walked over to Prime, and began to tear at his body’s plating. He slowly ripped the grill off his chest, piece by piece, Prime crying out in intense pain. Galvatron soon turned his attention to the Autobot’s remaining arm, and began to slowly wrench a finger off.

‘In pain Prime?’ he rhetorically asked in a sadistic tone of voice.

Prime focused. He could not let the pain get to him. He must defeat Galvatron. Galvatron seemed like he was not putting in nearly as much effort as he would clearly be capable of. Perhaps he could use this to his advantage?

‘Not as much as you think Galvatron!’ Prime declared, freeing his left arm, and grabbing Galvatron’s throat, ripping out the plate and ripping the wires apart inside.

Galvatron backed off very quickly, seeming to choke intensely. The red plates on his chest lit up, and Cyclonus, Scourge, the Sweeps reactivated and scrambled to their leader who had fallen down, gasping due to the ripped wires. Two Sweeps picked up the body and everyone hastily charged to the temporary space bridge module, activating it and in a great, magnificent show of lights, vanished.

Prime had won, but only by a narrow grab with no guarantee of success. Galvatron would live, but would he?

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